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Chapter 14: A Caged Flashback ft. A Boxing Champ

Starring
Simon Hiu (deleted member)
Boxxxer (deleted member)

NARRATOR

A couple weeks before Jax has his fight with Havoc, he goes to his local gym and bumps into a familiar face. About a week fresh from his eventual victory from his last spar with Zay, Jax feels pretty good about himself and a spar between him and Boxxxer ensues.

SCENE

THE TRAVELLER
I've been back at my place for about a week or so after spending some time in Canada with my bro Zay. I finally beat him in a spar and had to come back to the states to take care of some business, setting some routine back here while I'm still here, going to my local gym's cage room just to practice every night. Tonight, I see a familar face, who darts by the gym, and it seems he sees me too, as we lock eyes. "Well well well, if it isn't the Boxxxer himself? Long time no see," I say as I approach you.

BOXXXER
I grin and step to you , "well if it isnt the champ in training, how are you doing man" I say as I give you a big hug and hold you for a moment. Im a bit sweaty from my run but wearing my mma shorts and running shoes. "What are you doing back in the states so soon bro?"

THE TRAVELLER
I return your hug, making it a little tight so we can feel each other up, before we both release. "Haha hey now, doing pretty well! I got a call from my personal coach/promoter saying that I have this big guy who wants to face me in two weeks time. I figured now would be good a time as any to come back to the States to also take care of some business. What brings you to the area man?" I respond and ask as I eye your sweaty, tight body.

BOXXXER
I grin and look down then back up into your eyes "well, I need to train up so punks like you don't tap me out as easily anymore," I say as I flex my abs, arms and chest. My shorts have the brand of the gym on them and I grin. "I train here now dude!"

THE TRAVELLER
"Heh," I chuckle as I see you flex your abs, arms, and chest, "looks like your training has done you well so far. Wanna put those muscles to the test? There's an open cage just through the center door in the back. I have it booked every night around this time for about two hours," I say flashing a smirk at you while tensing up my body a bit just to match your flexing.

BOXXXER
I grin "hell yeah bro let's do it" i say as I grab my gear bag and walk back to the cage with you. Willing and ready to show you that I can beat you or at the very least put up a hard fight.

THE TRAVELLER
With my sling bag on my back, I use my head to gesture to you to follow me. We chat a bit and taunt each other. We enter the room with the cage. I flip on a switch on the inside so that a red light on the outside of the entrance turns on, indicating the room is in use. "Alright big man, you seem ready, so head into the cage; I'll get my gear on and join you," I say to you as I shamelessly strip off my black compression shirt and dark green athletic shorts, revealing my camo-themed compression shorts. I slip on dark green, padded, fingerless gloves and my black ankle support socks and make my way to the cage.

BOXXXER
I put on my blue mma gloves, then slip in my white mouthguard and strip down to my dark blue compression shorts, bouncing on my toes shadow boxing and rolling my neck n shoulders warming up a little waiting on you to get in the cage.

THE TRAVELLER
As I enter the cage, I pop in my black mouthguard and motion for you to join me at the center. "You ready for this bud? Round 2." I ask with a little caution, eyeing your built body.

BOXXXER
I step up to you and slap gloves with you. "Lets do this bro" I say as I step back to my side of the cage, ready to prove I can beat you and last time was a fluke.

THE TRAVELLER
I slap gloves with you, cock my head a bit and smirk. "Hope you're ready man," I say with a smirk and step back to my side of the cage too. "Get ready... BEGIN!" I shout and start to bounce on my toes and circle you, bringing my guard to protect myself and have my eyes constantly watching your entire body to see for your first move.

BOXXXER
I circle with you center cage ready to show you that im a fighter. I step in with a straight right to the nose then try to clinch up with you.

THE TRAVELLER
I see you step in and and go for the straight right. I bring up my left forearm and motion it to the left side to push your arm further up and to the left and clinch up with you as you're exposed, pushing against you. I bring up my right knee to your abs and then send a snap-kick to your naval to break the clinch. "You've gotten better bro... but so have I," I bounce on my feet and wink at you, getting back into stance and waiting for your response.

BOXXXER
Clinched up but then "uhhgff aughfff" 2 clean body shots and I'm outta the clinch. I take a deep breath and square up with you. I throw a short right hook at your face then a left hook to the jaw followed by a right uppercut to the abs. Trying to use my boxing skills.

THE TRAVELLER
I neutralize your hooks by using circular motions with my left arm and hand to push your right hand and arm out and down and the same with my right hand to your left, pushing it out and up. As you recover from the blocks and come back in with a right uppercut, I push down on your right fist with my right hand and then grab your wrist with my left, and shove that out to the side to expose you, and while you're guard is open, I jump and spin for a counterclockwise right roundhouse kick aimed at your neck, sticking to my Northern Shaolin knowledge to keep you on your toes and eventually overwhelm you.

BOXXXER
My arm pushed out then "aughhffshh" I take a huge kick and fall to the mat face down as I moan and then get my hands up to cover up my face as I try to roll over to my back.

THE TRAVELLER
"You've definitely gotten better man. C'mon, get up and face me when you can," I bounce back and away from you and get into a solid stance, watching you carefully.

BOXXXER
I moan a little and sit up. I shake my head and stand up. I punch my gloves together and square up with you. I slap gloves with you and get my hands up ready to fight.

THE TRAVELLER
As I slap gloves with you again, I get into a more Northern Shaolin stance before rushing at you to break your guard. I use my left arm to push your arms down and grab a hold of your left wrist. While I do that, I send right chop to your neck and then pull your arms up to send a horizontal right chop to your solar plexus before backing up and finish the combination with a counterclockwise spinning left heel kick across your face, connecting with your right cheek.

BOXXXER
Never seeing this style I take the blows hard "aghhfff uhhggfff oohhmpshhhh" my body turns and I fall to the mat again. Dazed this time face down and moaning a little as I feel a small cut on my upper right cheek.

THE TRAVELLER
"I think it's time to end this, don't you?" I can feel my compression shorts tenting, my cock getting hard at the prospect of what comes next. I rush down at you and mount your back and wrap in a rear-naked choke, use my feet to turn us around and then wrap a bodyscissor around you. "Time to tap or nap, little boxer," I whisper in your ear while slowly and steadily increasing the pressure of the two holds, only for it to get tighter a bit faster because of the increased arousal I'm feeling from seeing your tight body in my grasp.

BOXXXER
I struggle as you mount my back and take the hold easily. I struggle and you turn us over. Those powerful legs wrapping around my body and those strong arms really tightening up the hold. I struggle hard and pull at your arms but the choke is sunk in deep. My face turns red and I struggle to breathe in at all from the legs wrapping around me and the choke.

THE TRAVELLER
I feel you struggle, and boy does it feel so hot. My cock, hardened, rubs against your back as I move to tighten the scissors around your torso and I continue to keep tightening the RNC. "What's it gonna be man, tap, or nap?" I whisper with an increasing urge in your ear, ready to keep the pressure going if I need to.

BOXXXER
I can feel that hard cock grinding into my back as you enjoy dominating me in the cage. I wrestle and try with everything I've got left but it's too late. My vision starts to fade as I'm too stubborn to tapout trying to prove that I can fight to you. My pulling at your arms becoming weaker and my body no longer struggling to get out.

THE TRAVELLER
I feel you fading, but you're still putting some effort into trying to break the RNC. Your body stops struggling, but you're still trying to resist in some way. And it's beyond hot. I continue to tighten the combination hold, squeezing your torso tight with my thighs and pressing my forearm against your throat with my bicep pressed against your carotid artery. "C'mon man, whatever you got left, tap out now," I seductively demand.

BOXXXER
"Ngmmfff" I grunt out as i pull but im getting weaker and weaker. My vision almost faded out. I struggle n squirm but then my arms fall resting on the mat as my eyes close and I go limp in your hold.

THE TRAVELLER
"Huh, guess you chose to nap," I say as I feel you go limp in my hold. I gently unwrap my legs from your torso and my arms from your neck, and set you down gently. I get up on my feet and raise my arms in victory, and then move back down. I mount your chest and lightly slap your left cheek. "C'mon dude, I want you awake for this next part." I smirk while trying to wake you.

BOXXXER
I wake up slowly on the mat. As my vision clears up I see you sitting on my chest dominantly. I let out a small sigh realizing that not only did I lose again but I got put out.

THE TRAVELLER
"well well well, look who has come to... Ready for what we agreed upon fighter?" I give you a wink and casually flex a double bicep pose while staying mounted on you.

BOXXXER
I pull out my mouthguard and toss it to the side. "Yeah, let's get it over with champ" I say reluctantly. Looking up at your strong body realizing that I'm no where near the fighter you are.

THE TRAVELLER
"Heh, cheer up bro! You've gotten better," I wink at you and begin to feel your body seductively.

BOXXXER
I lay there and let you rub me down as i moan a little enjoying those gentle gloved hands caressing my body under you.

THE TRAVELLER
"I'll patch you up after," I wink, and in moment of passion I strip off my gloves and toss them to the side, grab your shoulders, and turn you around on your back and start to massage your shoulders and back while I start to hump your lower back with my hardened cock, biting my lip as I feel your tight muscles with my hands.

BOXXXER
I just relax and submit to the champ. You roll me over face down on the mat. Your mma gloves go to the side but i grab one of them and as you rub my back and hump me a little I sniff your sweaty mma glove and let out a small moan.

THE TRAVELLER
"Heh, you like that bud?" I chuckle and smirk as I see you totally to submit to me, the scent left over from my gloves. I gently move myself and massage you downwards until my hands reach your compression shorts, and I begin to slide it off. I slide mine off too, throw it up towards you in case you wanna give that a sniff. Both bare in the cage, I massage your ass a bit before I slide my fully hard cock slowly into your tight hole. "Seems you're the champ for taking this, man," I chuckle out and begin fucking you.

BOXXXER
I take a whiff of your sweaty used compressions as you slip into me slowly. I close my eyes and wince n whimper as you put it in me, hurting me and dominating me fully in the cage. I whimper and grimace n wince taking the dick as i bite down on your glove n moan as you start to fuck me on the mat in the cage.

THE TRAVELLER
"You good bud?" I ask while keeping my dick in your hole.

BOXXXER
Taking deep short breaths as I struggle to adjust to that champ cock. Biting down on your glove as I nod my head yes and let out a few soft moans.

THE TRAVELLER
I smirk and chuckle, "good boy" I let out in a deeper tone. I fuck you more aggressively now, ramming my cock into your prostate over and over, pre leaking out of my cock and smoothing out your hole and my cock, making it easier and easier to continue pounding your prostate.

BOXXXER
Getting fucked harder now as I whimper and moan under you. Your rod slamming into my prostate as I get hard under you from getting fucked.

THE TRAVELLER
"Mmm, you like that don't you boy?" I begin talking down to you and then move my left hand to begin stroking your cock as I fuck you harder and harder.

BOXXXER
I arch my lower back up a little to give your hand better access to my hard cock. Letting you stroke me and fuck me at the same time. Wincing and whimpering a little submissivley under you as I take it from the champ stud.

THE TRAVELLER
I can feel your tip ooze some pre and I use that to stroke you easily while I continue fucking you. "Yeahhhh, Boxing Champ, give it to me boy!!" I say in a deep, seductive tone.

BOXXXER
I leak and moan as you put me in a world of pain and pleasure as you fuck me hard and stroke my hard cock. Moaning out in pleasure as i begin to enjoy the punishment of losing.

THE TRAVELLER
"Ughhh, yeah, take my cock like the champ you are," I moan out and then continue to stroke and tease your cumvein and balls while I continue to fuck you so good.

BOXXXER
I close my eyes and wince n whimper under you. Getting absolutely dominated in the cage. All of a sudden my body tenses up. My balls tighten and my cock gets rigid in your hand. I let out an "aaaughhh uhhhgggfff ffffuuckkkk" as I moan out I start to shoot cum all over the mat under me and blow a massive load.

THE TRAVELLER
As I hear you moan, I moan out too, smirking, and yell and moan out, "YEAHHHHHHH, UGHHHHHHHH" while I shoot my load into you. My body tenses up and I feel so much pleasure as I shoot ropes and ropes of my cum into you, you taking it all like a good boy.

BOXXXER
I lay there as you bury that cock in me and shoot ropes of cum deep up in me. Owning me in the cage as i just lay there and take it. Feeling you filling me up as I get fucked like a bitch punk.

THE TRAVELLER
As I empty my load into you and you spill yours over the cage floor, I slowly rise up and gently remove my cock from your hole. I slap your back twice, lightly. "Heh, you got better bro, but I was also training constantly too. Better luck next time, " I say and demount you and use my right foot to roll you over onto your back and playfully plant my foot on your abs as I do a double bicep pose and then I extend my left hand down to you. "So, shall we hit the showers? I'll put a note for this cage to get cleaned up," I chuckle and wink at you.

BOXXXER
I wince a little as you pull out and slap my back a few times. As you put me on my back I look up at you. In awe of your strength and ability to so easily dominate me. I take the help up and walk with you slowly to the showers with my arm around your shoulder helping me back.

THE TRAVELLER
We walk towards the showers and as I hold your body, your arm around my shoulder and my arm around your waist, I sneak a few brushes of my hand across your hard abs. I get a little hard again and just for a moment, wonder how I was able to beat you, a kid who's boxxed all his life, has a few inches on me, and such a nicely built frame, and I smirk a bit.

BOXXXER
We get to the locker room and I start pulling off my mma gloves. Already naked and so are you we step into the steamy shower room. I turn the knob and stand under the hot water letting it flow over my body. Resting my forehead against the tile wall as I'm a bit ashamed of myself for getting beat and getting buttfucked yet again.

THE TRAVELLER
I peek over at you and my cock rises once again. As you turn around in the shower you see me lost in a gaze of your amazing body, getting turned on by it. "Damn bro, you have a nice body" the words fall out of my mouth.

BOXXXER
I look over at you n see you lookimg me over. I smile as you compliment my body. "Thanks stud, glad you like it" I say as i look at that hardening dick. Thinking about what it just did to me in the cage. Staring at it a little bit.

THE TRAVELLER
I bite my lip again, trying to resist the thoughts of wanting you to drain me good. Suddenly, I can't. The words fall out of my mouth as I gesture to my hard cock. "Suck it boy," I say with a little sinister and seductive tone.

BOXXXER
I grin, "no, make me chump" saying with a bit of resistance and attitude. A slight grin on my face as I look your hard fighting built body over.

THE TRAVELLER
I smirk at you with a dark intent. I playfully wrap my right arm under your left, and lock my left arm around the back of your neck to try this elevated arm triangle choke as I lift you off the ground, pressing you in towards my shoulder.

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BOXXXER
You walk to me and just wrap me up. Getting lifted off the ground and choked out at the same time in this hold I've never seen or heard of before as i struggle to remain concious.

THE TRAVELLER
"C'mon dude, you can either tap or pass out again, but either way you'll have to suck me good" I whisper with that deep and dark tone.

BOXXXER
I struggle hard and start to fade out. I reach out and slap your side trying to tapout.

THE TRAVELLER
"Ah, good!" I say and gently place you on your feet and let go of the hold, still keeping my arms around you in some way but wanting to see if you can keep yourself up.

BOXXXER
I manage to keep steady and grin at you as you hold me, "still not sucking you" I say with a grin.

THE TRAVELLER
"You are one tough cookie Justin," I mutter and then I turn you around in the shower and wrap a sleeper hold on you. "Would you rather you suck me off or I fuck you again? Your choice," I whisper in your ear.

BOXXXER
You turn me around and lock on that sleeper hold but your not squeezing it yet. I grin as I pull at your arms but I feel that cock poking at my butt again. I growl a bit and say "I'm not sucking that dick."

THE TRAVELLER
"Either way you're getting my seed again," I growl back at you, "and you'll enjoy it" and I begin squeezing the sleeper slowly and steadily.

BOXXXER
I feel that strong arm applying the squeeze and I fight it. Naturally reveling against you. Trying to prove I'm tough even though I'm in a very vulnerable and weak position as you start choking me out naked in the shower.

THE TRAVELLER
I begin to slide my cock up and down your ass crack while I continue to choke you out in the shower. "Give in bro, or you can tap now and suck my cock," I whisper while continuing to tighten the hold.

BOXXXER
I can feel that throbbing cock grinding on my ass. Mmm it feels so good and strong. I close my eyes a bit and relax some in the hold as you keep up the choke, weakening me fast as I start to fade.

THE TRAVELLER
"You tap, you suck it, you nap, well, it's another round for your ass." I let out while my cock is leaking pre again as I continue to tease your crack and tighten the hold continuously, beginning to lift you up in it.

BOXXXER
Starting to fade as you give me the option. Wanting to tapout but not wanting to give up. I can feel that throbbing hungry cock in my crack as you start to lift me off the floor.

THE TRAVELLER
"c'mon Justin, just give in... Give me the tap... And I'll give you mine," I whisper darkly, bouncing you as I lift you with the sleeper, tightening it ever so slightly.

BOXXXER
Choking a bit and starting to fade out, I start to go limp and as you start to bounce me I pass out in your arms, limp and still in the hold as you put me out again.

THE TRAVELLER
"Mmm... Damn... Gotta hand it to you kid... You're a fighter til the end." I whisper as I feel you go limp and put you on your feet and lean you against the wall of the shower. "You're gonna wake up to something different now," I mutter and begin shoving my dick in your hole again, trying to fuck you back into consciousness, gently for now until you do wake up.

BOXXXER
Limp and leaning on the wall with your help still up on my feet. My body moving with each thrust of your cock up into me. I start to moan a little as i slowly wake up. I get a jolt of pain and come to a bit quicker realizing I'm getting held up against the wall of the showers. I feel the pressure of you then realize that your dick is up in me again. I close my eyes n grit my teeth trying to deal with the feeling of cock up in me again.

THE TRAVELLER
"Heh, you up big boy? Good," I lean up to whisper while thrusting inside you, "you're gonna take my load like a good boy," I continue while beginning to pound your prostate more aggressively and keeping you pinned to the wall with my left forearm pressed against the back of your neck.

BOXXXER
Forced to the wall as you tell me whats gonna happen. I wince n grunt and moan as I take dick from you yet again. Eyes closed as I grit my teeth and take the fucking.

THE TRAVELLER
As I keep you pinned to the wall and continue to fuck you, I move my right hand to find your whole package, beginning to tease it again. Tickling your balls, tracing your cumvein with my middle finger, and then stroking your shaft. As I do my work, I move my left forearm from pinning you to the wall to wrap around your neck, trying to exercise total physical and sexual domination onto you, waiting to see when your "breaking point" for either... Or both... Would be, and a slight evil smirk creeps upon my face as I continue my aggression.

BOXXXER
Pinned hard to the wall, absolutely no escape as I get drilled hard by you. I can feel your hard dick just pounding away at my ass, each stroke chipping away at my manhood. Your strong right hand toys with my balls and cock as you start to get my cock hard again. Then that strong arm wraps around my neck, choking me a bit. Getting physically, mentally and sexually dominated by you as I take it all up against the wall.

THE TRAVELLER
I feel your cock start to quiver and get hard as I work on it, trying to restrain myself from cumming in your ass before I get you to come. My head tilts up, "ohhhhh yeahhhhhh" I moan out while continuing to stroke you good, pre flowing out of your tip already, making it easier and easier to stroke you more and more aggressively as I steadily drill your hole, all the while my left arm around your neck unintentionally gets increasingly tighter at a slow pace.

BOXXXER
Your left arm slowly flexing and cutting off my blood flow and air as you tighten up. My hard leaking cock dribbling out precum onto your hand that has a firm controlling grip on my cock. My ass getting absolutely drilled by you as you fuck me hard. Pinned up on the wall, getting it hard from my opponent as I take it all like a bitch. Eyes closed, whimpering some as well as a few moans of pleasure mixed in. Trying to be a good boy and let you take me how you want to.

THE TRAVELLER
I hear your whimpers that fade to moans. I lean up to your ear and let out a low, mischievous chuckle followed by a "good boy," and consistently pound your prostate with more and more intensity, stroking you harder and faster as the fucking is upped, waiting to feel your cock throb in your hands while trying not to lose control in the pleasure I'm feeling too, being so totally dominant, as I let out some moans that hit your ear.

BOXXXER
You chuckle in my ear and I look down, almost ashamed im letting my opponent do this to me. Still whimpering a bit but moaning as well. Accepting that in your fuck toy. Trying to allow myself to feel pleasure from getting dominated thoroughly by you. My own cock leaking more, throbbing in your firm grip. My ass getting beat up by you as you just continue to pound me.

THE TRAVELLER
I lean up to your ear again, and whisper in that dark tone, "alright Justin, be a good boy and bust it again, ON MY COMMAND!" The whisper gets a little louder at the end as I continue to up the intensity of the stroke and fucking. As it gets faster and faster, I can feel I'm about to climax and feel your cock throb in my hands, about to reach that point too, and I can't help my left arm around your throat also tightening out of my control. "NOW BOY, LET IT ALL OUT!!" I yell about to bust into your hole again.

BOXXXER
I wince n moan out as you start to stroke me faster, as well as really pounding my ass. Just getting smashed by you. My cock throbbing hard, leaking alot. You whisper in my ear again and I have to hold myself back best I can as you command me to cum when you say so. As soon as you say now boy, I tense up and start blowing a huge load all over the wall and your hand as I tense up my body and I almost go limp in your grip as your choke gets even tighter and I'm struggling to stay conscious. I can feel your hard dick up in me throbbing as you pound my butt hard.

THE TRAVELLER
As I feel you finally bust your load again, I yell out in extreme pleasure, "YEAHHHH THAT'S IT" and I discharge ropes and ropes of my second load into you again moaning and shivering intensely, and it forces my left arm that's wrapped around you to alternate between a tight and loose grip very sporadically as we continue to discharge. As we both finish and I empty into you, I smirk and let out another chuckle into your ear. "Good boy... Now let's shower each other clean," I say and then turn you around and put your back up against the wall for you to regain some breath.

BOXXXER
Panting as my balls empty then I feel that huge cock bust yet another big load up in me. I feel you shiver and shake as you fill me up again. I do the same standing there as I just take it, feeling your hot ropes of fighter cum fill me up again. Your arm choking and releasing sporadically until you finish. I'm turned around and pinned to the wall as you say let's shower. I'm panting and just looking at you, cum leaking outta me slowly as pant and you keep me pinned to the wall. Looking at your perfect fighter body knowing that you just took me twice and are the alpha male.

THE TRAVELLER
As soon as I can feel you able to stand on your own again, I release my support from holding you on the wall. We begin to rub and rinse each other's bodies, cleaning the cum and sweat off us. "Heh, you're hot boy, and you're mine," I smirk as we shower and scrub each other clean. After we're both cleaned, we turn off the water and head out of the shower, re-entering the locker room shamelessly nude and then change into a fresh pair of clothes, and we slowly make our way out of the gym, my arm wrapped around the back of your waist and your arm draped over the back of my neck and over my opposite shoulder, to head back to my place for the night.

END FLASHBACK

Published: 2022-12-07, viewed 145 times.

Comments

15

Apollo Dante (deleted member)

2022-12-08 22:00

Another amazing chapter of the Traveller’s Chronicles and I have to say this shows just how much he has developed as a results of everything he has experienced. Meeting up with Boxxxer could have ended either way but Jax dominated him. To post match exceeded anything I have seen more from him so far. The whole story was first class! A great read!


Simon Hiu (deleted member)

2022-12-08 22:04

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Thank you for your thoughts and for reading this throwback match! Boxxxer is amazingly entertaining to write with, and it seems that my base skills even before my international training was enough to dominate this scene... in every way imaginable ;)

Thanks again for your continued interest in my journey, past and present :)


Maui Kid (deleted member)

2022-12-08 14:36

Great job to you both. A side of Jackson I have not seen before hehe. Thank you for sharing and could definitely sense a good chemistry between you two.

Mahalo
Tua


Simon Hiu (deleted member)

2022-12-08 14:38

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Thank you for reading and for your comment Tua!! This is a side of me not many has seen hehe. Boxxxer is very fun to write with :)

Thanks again!!


Drake NRW (deleted member)

2022-12-08 11:02

Hot stuff guys! Traveller rites another strong bout ad sexy Boxxer takes the fist and cock pounding like a man.


Simon Hiu (deleted member)

2022-12-08 11:57

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Thanks for reading and for your comment Drake!


MackB (deleted member)

2022-12-07 23:44

hot fight guys


Simon Hiu (deleted member)

2022-12-08 00:29

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Thanks Mack!


Bruno Stone (deleted member)

2022-12-07 19:38

I have go agree 100% with what Preppy and David just said. I was so into the story and it was thanks to your awesome writing skills. Feeling like I was actually reading a book, I have to applaud both of you. The fighting scene was thrilling and I couldn't stop reading. The Traveller won and Boxxxer took the short straw (or maybe long one *wink*) but either way the sex scene was arousing. I have to admit that I was a little sad when it was over. Thank you both so much, it was an honor being able to read this.
-Bruno


Simon Hiu (deleted member)

2022-12-07 19:56

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Bruno!! Thanks for reading and for your thoughts stud. This was a VERY fun chapter to co-write, and Justin is exciting and fun to write with. I fucked him twice!! Maybe you can replay both moments in your mind hehe.

Thank you again for reading and for your comment!!


David Wolfsbane (deleted member)

2022-12-07 19:27

I think Jackson already made the perfect description for this hot fight: "What happens when you put a Boxer and an MMA fighter in a cage?" And what sounds a bit like one these trick questions gives us a short and hard fight, in which the MMA fighter clearly has the upper hand and a Jackson, as dominant as never before, choking and fucking and even playing with Justin several times.
And as Preppy already mentioned, that you took the time and effort to give the reader a view into your minds and thoughts and describe your feelings, makes your whole story much more immersive and let the reader slide into it.
You both just made a great scene, which was fun to read and is so well and great written.
Great Job and Thank you!!


Simon Hiu (deleted member)

2022-12-07 19:32

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Thank you for reading and for your thoughts David!! Really appreciate you taking the time to read this fun scene and giving these amazingly descriptive thoughts on what me and Justin put together.

Thanks again for reading and for your comment!!


Preppy Porter (deleted member)

2022-12-07 19:12

Never thought I would get drawn in when reading a boxing based story,, but this one made me look at a boxing based story in a new light. Excellent attention given here to detail that made a non boxer like me feel the action, hurt, elation, disappointment etc of each fighter. I also like each fighter expressing his own thoughts and mindset as the action went on. It gives the reader an understanding of what each man is feeling much more than merely writing about the the action, this story described the result and after effects of the action. Well Done!!


Simon Hiu (deleted member)

2022-12-07 19:16

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Thank you for reading, and for your amazingly detailed thoughts on how you felt about the scene, and throughout. It was such an amazing time writing with Boxxxer, and I guess this is just an example when you put a boxer in a cage with an MMA fighter haha ;)


Boxxxer (deleted member)

2022-12-07 19:13

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Thanks man, love that you liked it and enjoyed the story.