This is another awesome episode in this thrilling and enthralling story. The relationship between Banks and Laurent gets better and better causing this reader to be drawn into their interaction their bodies entwined, their passion their devotion and yes their lust for each other. Can’t wait for the denouement guys- so very well done as always
This is my first stab at Noir style writing, and as usual, my writing partner here is fantastic. Looking forward to the conclusion to the story coming up.
I must admit, this story is fascinating to read from my perspective. Afterall, I may have witnessed a thing or two related to the historic events presented here.
That is much appreciated, Monsieur. The finale is coming soon.
The Author (deleted member)
2021-12-14 16:16
It's worth noting that the events with Bronko and Dean in part 2 are real, but a little exaggerated. I was thrilled when I found out Bronko was a legitimate Chicago Bear, and about the rivalry they shared in 1937. It all fit in too perfectly not to include in some way considering this is a story hosted on CF.
Banks is a character I'm really enjoying developing. I must give a big shoutout to my co-author on this.
*a message from the past* Merci Beaucoup. There is more to the story than has been told so far.
ErikAtlas (deleted member)
2021-12-11 19:37
These guys went back in time, doing a fine piece of historical writing and a great story! Gritty beautiful look at the past! (Hot men!) Parts 1 and 2 below
Inspector Fernand Laurent (deleted member)
2022-01-13 02:24The conclusion (or is it?) has posted - https://mars.chatfighters.com/story/58078
Inspector Fernand Laurent (deleted member)
2022-01-09 06:16We're not quite done yet.....
https://mars.chatfighters.com/story/57975
SweatAlpha aka AlphaEd (deleted member)
2022-01-02 14:54This is another awesome episode in this thrilling and enthralling story. The relationship between Banks and Laurent gets better and better causing this reader to be drawn into their interaction their bodies entwined, their passion their devotion and yes their lust for each other. Can’t wait for the denouement guys- so very well done as always
The Author (deleted member)
2022-01-02 22:42(In reply to this)
This is my first stab at Noir style writing, and as usual, my writing partner here is fantastic. Looking forward to the conclusion to the story coming up.
Bartender Ghost (deleted member)
2022-01-02 22:39(In reply to this)
I must admit, this story is fascinating to read from my perspective. Afterall, I may have witnessed a thing or two related to the historic events presented here.
Inspector Fernand Laurent (deleted member)
2022-01-02 22:00(In reply to this)
That is much appreciated, Monsieur. The finale is coming soon.
The Author (deleted member)
2021-12-14 16:16It's worth noting that the events with Bronko and Dean in part 2 are real, but a little exaggerated. I was thrilled when I found out Bronko was a legitimate Chicago Bear, and about the rivalry they shared in 1937. It all fit in too perfectly not to include in some way considering this is a story hosted on CF.
Banks is a character I'm really enjoying developing. I must give a big shoutout to my co-author on this.
Inspector Fernand Laurent (deleted member)
2021-12-14 18:15(In reply to this)
Inspector Fernand Laurent (deleted member)
2021-12-12 06:35*a message from the past* Merci Beaucoup. There is more to the story than has been told so far.
ErikAtlas (deleted member)
2021-12-11 19:37These guys went back in time, doing a fine piece of historical writing and a great story! Gritty beautiful look at the past! (Hot men!) Parts 1 and 2 below
https://mars.chatfighters.com/story/55827
https://mars.chatfighters.com/story/57062
Inspector Fernand Laurent (deleted member)
2021-12-29 02:59(In reply to this)
For those who liked the first two parts, the third one is now posted https://mars.chatfighters.com/story/57544